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Creation Story

July 15, 2014 by amckoy   

Angus’ reflection on Tom Poole’s Creation Story

I think he has done well with his creation story he has put his own words well in a kid friendly version but not all of it. Maybe next time he could have had his success criteria a higher level  and he could have stopped for a pause at full stops because he just kept reading at the same pace. He spoke very clearly as well as having some enthusiasim. I learnt from Tom how to put writing in my own words which will help me a lot when I have a task like that.


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